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the line graph gives information about percentage of household recycling in three various nations which are UK, France and Germany during the period 2005 and 2015. In France the rate was 50% in 2005, the figure shows gradual decrease keep to the end of time until it became 30% in 2013, after that it rose to 40% in 2015. In UK the proportion was around 35% in 2005, it was 40% in 2007 and it is the same for 2009, than the percentage increased to approximately 55% in 2011, it reach to the highest point which is 60% in 2015. In Germany the rate was 20% in 2005, it keep increased till the proportion became about 45% in 2011, than rose to around 55% in 2015. overall, it can be clearly seen from the line graph that UK had the highest percentage was 60% and France had the lowest percent was 40%.
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line graph gives information about percentage of household recycling in three various nations which are UK, France and Germany during the period 2005 and 2015.

In France the rate was 50% in 2005, the figure
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of time until it became 30% in 2013, after that it rose to 40% in 2015. In UK the proportion was around 35% in 2005, it was 40% in 2007 and it is the same for 2009, than the percentage increased to approximately 55% in 2011, it
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increased till the proportion became about 45% in 2011, than rose to around 55% in 2015.

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from the line graph that UK had the highest percentage was 60% and France had the lowest percent was 40%.
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6.0
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