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The chart below shows the number of traffic accidents involving casualties in three different countries between 1994 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the key features and making comparisons where relevent.

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This chart shows the numbers of accidents involving casualties in three countries. These countries are the United States, Japan and India. This chart includes data from 1994 to 2014. The number of accidents involving casualties of the United States had decreased during the past two decades. On the contrary, the number in India had slightly increased. For Japan, the number rose during the first decade and subsequently fell during another one. In more details, the highest accident number was in the United States for the entire period. In 1994, the accident number of the United States was around two million, which was a considerable number. The number had fallen noticably by 2014. It dropped to approximately 1. 5 million. In stark contrast, there was a sizable increase in the number of accidents in India. The figure was initially around 0. 3 million in 1994. It kept rising to 0. 5 million by 2014. In Japan, the number of accidents involving casualties was higher than India in 1994, which was around 0. 7 million. And it reached to near a million in 2002. After 2006, the number declined steadly and fell to 0. 5 million in 2014.
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for the entire period. In 1994, the
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involving casualties was higher than India in 1994, which was around 0. 7
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in 2002. After 2006, the
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