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The given pie chart illustrates the reasons behind world wide land degradation in percentages. However, the table shows the distribution of these reasons among 3 regions of the world. Over graining is the most common reason leading to worldwide land degradation, by a score of 35 percent, 11. 3 percent of Oceana lands are suffering from over graining, which is the highest compared to other regions, then followed by Europe with a 5. 1 percent, and America 2 percent. The other worldwide leading causes for land degradation are deforestation, and over cultivation, with a score of 30, and 28 in turn. Deforestation is highly applied in Europe, and to less extent in Oceana, and north America 9. 8, 1. 8, and 0. 2 percent respectively, however, despite that overcultivation is highly applied in Europe, but it is less done in Oceana compared to America with a score of 7. 7, 3, and 0 percent. Other causes occupy 7 percent of the world land degradation. In conclusion 22 percent of Europe lands are degraded due to aforementioned reasons, then followed by Oceana, and America by a percentage of 13, and 5 sequentially.
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leading to worldwide
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, 11. 3
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of Oceana
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. The other worldwide leading causes for
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degradation are deforestation, and over cultivation, with a score of 30, and 28 in turn. Deforestation is
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