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How does the way something appears influence your decision to buy it?

How does the way something appears influence your decision to buy it? dlX82
When I buy something, I will consider its different aspects, but there are two factors that influence importantly to my purchasing decision. First, the combination is the most attractive. The way how they mix various elements usually catches my attention. For example, book is one of my favorite items. When looking for books on Internet, I usually pay attention on its cover. The style how the editors arrange the images or the title attracts my curiosity. In addition, when they combine ingeniously between cold and hot colour, the outside of the book is more vibrant. Second, the material is also important. This factor contributes to the practical value of the items. In fact, living in a tropical country, I tend to choose the material that is comfortable with rainy and sunny season. For instance, while buying shoes, I usually consider the plastic material that is light, and I can wear anytime, especially in rainy season. Furthermore, this kind of shoes is easy to clean and quick to dry. In conclusion, when I purchase something, the combination of the elements and the material of the items influence seriously to my decision.
When I
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buy
something, I will consider its
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different
aspects,
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but
there are two factors that influence
importantly
to my purchasing decision.
First
, the combination is the most attractive. The way how they mix various elements
usually
catches my attention.
For example
, book is one of my favorite items. When looking for books on Internet, I
usually
pay attention on its cover. The style how the editors arrange the images or the title attracts my curiosity.
In addition
, when they combine
ingeniously
between
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
and hot
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colour
, the outside of the book is more vibrant. Second, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
is
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
. This factor contributes to the practical value of the items. In fact, living in a tropical country, I tend to choose the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
that is
comfortable with rainy and sunny season.
For instance
, while buying shoes, I
usually
consider the plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
that is
light, and I can wear anytime,
especially
in rainy season.
Furthermore
, this kind of shoes is easy to clean and quick to dry.
In conclusion
, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
something, the combination of the elements and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
of the items influence
seriously
to my decision.
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IELTS academic How does the way something appears influence your decision to buy it?

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