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that took place in A accountancy's main office.

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The two blue prints illustrate renovation that took place in A accountancy's main office. In general, some of the previously partitioned walls were brought down creating a well arranged, neat and specious seating area. Prior to renovation, the office had nearly ten rooms and corridor. Office electronic, equipments and desks were in different rooms. While the new office had three rooms less, with equipments at the center and accessible to office working desks. In addition, sofas at the reception and common working area at the center were introduced, desks arranged in fours as well. Adjacent to reception exists newly introduced storage room. Lunch, meeting and managers office were maintained as they were previously.
The two blue prints illustrate renovation that took place in A accountancy's main office.

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some of the
previously partitioned walls
were brought
down creating a well arranged, neat and specious seating area.

Prior to renovation, the
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Office
electronic, equipments and desks were in
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rooms
. While the new
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office
had three
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rooms
less, with equipments at the center and accessible to
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office
working desks.

In addition
, sofas at the reception and common working area at the center
were introduced
, desks arranged in fours
as well
. Adjacent to reception exists
newly
introduced storage
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room
. Lunch, meeting and managers
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office
were maintained
as they were previously.
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IELTS academic that took place in A accountancy's main office.

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