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Inland energy consumption of coal, natural and hydro electricity, nuclear and petroleum.

Inland energy consumption of coal, natural and hydro electricity, nuclear and petroleum. gGWL3

The given graph illustrates the energy consumption from fossil and non fossil fuels in UK in million of oil or coal equivalent for a period of 4 years from 1992. The graph tries to emphasis the usage of important energies which include nuclear and hydro electricity, coal, petroleum and natural gases. The consumption of petroleum maintained a wide fluctuations. But maintained a relatively steady. And also a peak level of 80 tines had been attained in the year 1994. It is said to be in first position. The second and fourth positions were hold by coal and nuclear, hydro electricity respectively. More than 60tones of coal had been preferred in 1992 whereas it diminished to about 55 tones in 1995. The least and considerably steady pattern is been maintained by nuclear and hydroelectricity. Consumptions were about 20 tones and been a minority of total one fifth but maintained through out the period. The most striking and noticeable changes are about the natural gases. It reveals a markedly different trend. In the beginning it had maintained a second last position with usage about 55 tones then it had been jumped with a steady increase to almost first position to 78tones. After the second half of 1994 depicts more drastic changes.

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given
 graph illustrates the energy consumption from fossil and non fossil fuels in UK in Use "a million" or use a number before 'million'.a million
million
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to emphasis
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important
 energies which include nuclear and This word is normally spelled as one.hydroelectricity
hydro electricity
, coal, petroleum and natural gases. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 consumption of petroleum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreservecontrolprotectfinanceupholdprovide
maintained
 a wide Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "fluctuation"?fluctuation
fluctuations
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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maintained
 a relatively
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 a peak level of 80 tines had been attained
 in the year 1994. It is said
 to be in first
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position
. The second and fourth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withareapointspotseatenvironmentstand
positions
 were hold by coal and nuclear, This word is normally spelled as one.hydroelectricity
hydro electricity
respectively
. More than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
60tones
 of coal had been preferred
 in 1992 whereas it diminished to about 55 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
tones
 in 1995. The least and considerably
 steady pattern is been
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maintained
 by nuclear and hydroelectricity. Possible spelling mistake found.Consumption
Consumptions
 were about 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
tones
 and been a minority of total one fifth This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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maintained
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through out
 the period. The most striking and noticeable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 are about the natural gases. It reveals a markedly
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different
 trend. In the beginning it had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreservecontrolprotectfinanceupholdprovide
maintained
 a second last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withareapointspotseatenvironmentstand
position
 with usage about 55 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
tones
 then it had been jumped
 with a steady increase to almost first
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position
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78tones
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 the second half of 1994 depicts more drastic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
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