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information regarding the quantity of books borrows in 4 particularly village libraries

information regarding the quantity of books borrows in 4 particularly village libraries VYk1A

The given line chart clearly depicts information regarding the quantity of books borrows in 4 particularly village libraries. The 4 village libraries include Sutton Wood, West Eaton, Church Mount, and Rye slip. Overall, it can be noticeable that there are 2 general tendencies: an upward and a downward. In deep detail, it can be notice that the volume of books borrowed at Sutton Wood, book borrowed volumes at West Eaton, and that at Church Mount experienced the upward trend. To be specific, the volume at Sutton Wood escalated gradually form 250 in June to 275 in July and then peaked at 300 in September. Meanwhile, although the volume at West Eaton had increased steadily from 50 to 150 in the first two months before remaining constant at 150 throughout a month after that. Likewise, the volume at Church Mount climbed moderately from 50 at the beginning to 100 in July and then grown slightly to 150 at the end. Conversely, the figure at Rye slip underwent the downward trend; there were a continuous dip from 300 in June to 175 at the end of its.

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given
 line chart clearly
 depicts information regarding the quantity of books borrows in 4 particularly
 village libraries. The 4 village libraries include Sutton Wood, West Eaton, Church Mount, and Rye slip. Overall
, it can be noticeable that there are 2 general tendencies: an upward and a downward.

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volume
 of books borrowed at Sutton Wood, book borrowed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfigurequantitynumberamounttotalsize
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 at West Eaton, and that at Church Mount experienced the upward trend. To be specific, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfigurequantitynumberamounttotalsize
volume
 at Sutton Wood escalated gradually
 form 250 in June to 275 in July and then peaked at 300 in September. Meanwhile, although the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfigurequantitynumberamounttotalsize
volume
 at West Eaton had increased steadily
 from 50 to 150 in the first
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before
 remaining constant at 150 throughout a month after that. Likewise
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfigurequantitynumberamounttotalsize
volume
 at Church Mount climbed moderately
 from 50 at the beginning to 100 in July and then grown slightly
 to 150 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

Conversely
, the figure at Rye slip underwent the downward trend; there were a continuous dip from 300 in June to 175 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of its. 