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Information on three modes of transport used by people travelling from the UK between 1996 and 2002 is provided in the table summarize the give information by reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

Information on three modes of transport used by people travelling from the UK between 1996 and 2002 is provided in the table summarize the give information by reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. rGVnl
The table shows how people who used means of transport to travel in the UK from 1996 to 2002. It is clear from the data given that travelling by air was the most commonly used among the three modes of transport. In addition, the figure for people travelling by sea fluctuated slightly during the same period. In 1996, the number of people travelling by air was the highest, at 30 million. On the other hand, the figures for those travelling by sea was higher than the figure for tunnels, at 11 million and 3. 3 million respectively. Concerning travelling by air, there was an upward trend until 2002. At this point, the figure stood at 44 million. To sum up, travelling by plane remained the most popular mode. By contrast, the figure for people travelling by the tunnel fluctuated between 3 million and 6 million, and reached its peak at 6 million in 2000. On the other hand, although there was some fluctuation, the figure for sea decreased from 11 million in 1996 to 10 million in 2002. In conclusion, travelling by sea and tunnel was the least common way to travel.
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means of transport to travel in the UK from 1996 to 2002.

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by air was the highest, at 30
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was higher than the
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for tunnels, at 11
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. Concerning
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remained the most popular mode.

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by the tunnel fluctuated between 3
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, and reached its peak at 6
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in 2000.
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decreased from 11
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in 1996 to 10
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and tunnel was the least common way to travel.
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IELTS academic Information on three modes of transport used by people travelling from the UK between 1996 and 2002 is provided in the table summarize the give information by reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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