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In one's house there is always a a room to which one is is attached the most which is the room for you? give approper reason for your choice.

In one's house there is always a a room to which one is is attached the most which is the room for you? give approper reason for your choice. EX8R
Everybody has one special room in the house. In the present days, people are make new big houses which are attractive and youngster are special where people can different activity in their personal room my study room is my own room. The first and foremost reason why my special room attractive. I have to make my room with my plan and structure as light green is my favourite colour with painted on the walls of my room. it reflect the lights at the room while my room as to make the latest design and involving the the 3D wallpaper on the walls my hobby reading so I make a safe of library in one side of my room. I think 500 to 600 and different type of books available in my room which is place of attractive. I have put the door everyone ring the door and then comes inside my room time and again my friends come into my room without saying the rings the doorbell but I am not angry beside my books, a study table and a computer there is nothing to make it constructed I believe my room is direct connect to my heart and attached my emotional value. I most time spend with the room and books. Many times, I read books and play games in computer. Whenever I enter into my room when all worry out of my mind feel very happyIn conclusion, I know about that many people have not any separate room due to lack of space. But I believe everybody should one personal room. Their people feel very relax they can prospective about their hobby.
Everybody has one special
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in the
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house
. In the present days,
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people
are
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make
new
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big
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houses
which are attractive and youngster are special where
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people
can
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different
activity in their personal
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room
my study
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room
is my
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own
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room
. The
first
and foremost reason why my special
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room
attractive. I
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have to
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make
my
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room
with my plan and structure as light green is my
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favourite
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colour
with painted on the walls of my
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room
.
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it
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reflect
the lights at the
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room
while my
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room
as to
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make
the latest design and involving
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the the
3D wallpaper on the walls my hobby reading
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so
I
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make
a safe of library in one side of my
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room
. I
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think
500 to 600 and
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different
type of
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books
available in my
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room
which is place of attractive. I have put the door everyone
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ring
the door and then
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comes
inside my
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room
time and again my friends
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come
into my
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room
without saying the rings the doorbell
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but
I am not angry beside my
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books
, a study table and a computer there is nothing to
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make
it constructed I believe my
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room
is direct connect to my heart and attached my emotional value.
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I
most time spend with the
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room
and
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books
.
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Many
times, I read
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books
and play games in computer. Whenever I enter into my
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room
when all worry out of my mind feel
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very
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happyIn
conclusion, I know about that
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many
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people
have not any separate
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room
due to lack of space.
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But
I believe everybody should one personal
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room
. Their
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people
feel
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very
relax they
The word 'prospective' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
can prospective
about their hobby.
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IELTS academic In one's house there is always a a room to which one is is attached the most which is the room for you? give approper reason for your choice.

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