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imagine you're alone on a remote island

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If I was on a desert island, I would find drinkable water and food because the most important thing is surviving until rescued. In that case, my priority is finding a source of clean drinkable water because the body can not live without liquids for more than 4 days. If there was no fresh water, I may catch any rainwater to drink. Subsequently, I would catch fish by creating a long spear from one of the branches I found on the island. Finally, being lost on a remote island is literally terrible but I would try my best to keep calm due to the fact of being nervous doesn’t help anything, I would set my mind at rest and wait for help. In conclusion, If I was lost on a remote island, I would do anything to survive and keep calm to wait for rescue. If I was on a desert island, I would find drinkable water and food because the most important thing is surviving until rescued. In that case, my priority is finding a source of clean drinkable water because the body can not live without liquids for more than 4 days. If there was no fresh water, I may catch any rainwater to drink. Subsequently, I would catch fish by creating a long spear from one of the branches I found on the island. Finally, being lost on a remote island is literally terrible but I would try my best to keep calm due to the fact of being nervous doesn’t help anything, I would set my mind at rest and wait for help. In conclusion, If I was lost on a remote island, I would do anything to survive and keep calm to wait for rescue.
If I was on a desert
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, I would find drinkable
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water
and food
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the most
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important
thing is surviving until rescued.
In that case
, my priority is finding a source of clean drinkable
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water
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because
the body can not
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live
without liquids for more than 4 days. If there was no fresh
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water
, I may
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catch
any rainwater to drink.
Subsequently
, I would
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catch
fish by creating a long spear from one of the branches I found on the
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island
.
Finally
, being
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on a
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remote
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island
is
literally
terrible
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I would try my best to
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calm
due to the fact of being nervous doesn’t
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help
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anything
, I would set my mind at rest and
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for
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help
.
In conclusion
, If I was
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lost
on a
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remote
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island
, I would do
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anything
to survive and
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keep
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calm
to
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wait
for rescue. If I was on a desert
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island
, I would find drinkable
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water
and food
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because
the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
thing is surviving until rescued.
In that case
, my priority is finding a source of clean drinkable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the body can not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
without liquids for more than 4 days. If there was no fresh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
, I may
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
catch
any rainwater to drink.
Subsequently
, I would
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
catch
fish by creating a long spear from one of the branches I found on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
.
Finally
, being
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lost
on a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
remote
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
is
literally
terrible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I would try my best to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keep
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
calm
due to the fact of being nervous doesn’t
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
anything
, I would set my mind at rest and
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wait
for
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help
.
In conclusion
, If I was
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lost
on a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
remote
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
, I would do
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
anything
to survive and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keep
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
calm
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wait
for rescue.

IELTS academic imagine you're alone on a remote island

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290 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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