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Imagine you are lost on a remote island.

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If I was on a desert island, I would find drinkable water and food because the most important thing is surviving until rescued. In that case, my priority is finding a source of clean drinkable water because the body can not live without liquids for more than 4 days. If there was no fresh water, I may catch any rainwater to drink. Subsequently, I would catch fish by creating a long spear from one of the branches I found on the island. Finally, being lost on a remote island is literally terrible but I would try my best to keep calm because of being nervous doesn’t help anything, I would set my mind at rest and wait for help. In conclusion, If I was lost on a remote island, I would do anything to survive and keep calm to wait for rescue.
If I was on a desert
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island
, I would find drinkable water and food
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the most
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important
thing is surviving until rescued.
In that case
, my priority is finding a source of clean drinkable water
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because
the body can not
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live
without liquids for more than 4 days. If there was no fresh water, I may catch any rainwater to drink.
Subsequently
, I would catch fish by creating a long spear from one of the branches I found on the
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island
.
Finally
,
being lost
on a remote
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island
is
literally
terrible
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but
I would try my best to
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keep
calm
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because
of being nervous doesn’t
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help
anything, I would set my mind at rest and wait for
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help
.
In conclusion
, If I
was lost
on a remote
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island
, I would do anything to survive and
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calm to wait for rescue.

IELTS academic Imagine you are lost on a remote island.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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