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Images of the stories of the most news are being published on print media

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Images of the stories of the most news are being published on print media and digital media on regular basis. A number of peoples think that images are carry the more content than the words which is extremely efficient. I do agree with the statement, while said that both sides of factor can be discussed, since it’s an individual choice of receivers. Obviously, visuals can talk lot of words even though it has not a sound feature. Key objective of the media reporting is carry a powerful message to readers and viewers within the limited time period and space availability. Therefore, an attractive image to be used in order to balance and increase the quality and productivity of messages. I also a big fan of believing that visuals can talk more than words. In example, showing an image of place is more attractive and easy than describing the particular place in words. On other hand, there can be situations where words must be used and individual images cannot be communicated the right meaning. In addition, if you use only pictures without words, readers may be get various kind of meaning subject to their individual views. For illustration, when you presenting a complicate visual with the line/bar chart which may difficult to understand and readers may get mislead about the message. In conclusion, using more visuals on the news are acceptable in the print or on digital Medias than using more words. Even though I agreed to the using more images, there are situations where readers and viewers are more concern about the words. Due to the fact, most of time best way is using the combination of both options which give an effective and clear structure
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being published
on print
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and digital
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with the statement, while said that both sides of factor can
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,
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can talk
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lot of
words
even though
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reporting is carry a powerful message to readers and viewers within the limited time period and space availability.
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, an attractive
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image
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used
in order to balance and increase the quality and productivity of messages. I
also
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big
fan of believing that
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visuals
can talk more than words. In example, showing an
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image
of place is more attractive and easy than describing the particular place in words.

On other hand, there can be situations where words
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must
be
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used
and individual
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cannot
be communicated
the right meaning.
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pictures without words, readers may be
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various kind of meaning subject to their individual views. For illustration, when
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visual with the line/bar chart which may difficult to understand and readers may
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mislead about the message.

In conclusion
, using more
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visuals
on the news are acceptable in the print or on digital
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Medias
than using more words.
Even though
I
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agreed
to the using more
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images
, there are situations where readers and viewers are more concern about the words. Due to the fact,
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most of time
best way is using the combination of both options which give an effective and
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IELTS academic Images of the stories of the most news are being published on print media

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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