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illustrates the different stages in the life cycle of a honey bee

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The diagram illustrates the different stages in the life cycle of a honey bee. Overall, there are five prime phases in the development of the honey bee, from eggs to mature adult insect. It is notable that the complete life cycle takes from 34 to 36 days. In the first stage of the life cycle, the female honey bee lay one or two eggs every three days. Then, these eggs hatch into the Nymphs after between 9 and 10 days. In the next stage of the life cycle, the Nymph undergo several body changes. It grows quickly in size and moults its skin three times. First, this moulting takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, seven days later, and finishes on ninth days. After the moulting stage, the Nymph develops into young adult emerges. After that, the young adults take 4 days to reach to full maturity and the life of cycle starts again.
The diagram illustrates the
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of a honey bee.

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, there are five prime phases in the development of the honey bee, from eggs to mature adult insect. It is notable that the complete
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takes from 34 to 36 days.

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, the female honey bee lay one or two eggs every three days. Then, these eggs hatch into the Nymphs after between 9 and 10 days.

In the
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, the Nymph undergo several body
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. It grows
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in size and
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its skin three times.
First
, this
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moulting
takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, seven days later, and finishes on ninth days. After the
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moulting
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, the Nymph develops into young adult emerges. After that, the young adults take 4 days to reach to full maturity and the
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IELTS academic illustrates the different stages in the life cycle of a honey bee

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  American English
4 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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