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Genres of our society in the text

Genres of our society in the text 1AyBL
The table illustrate the score of cinema viewing of films in five different countries, according to the genre of movies. Overall, any genres, which include, action, comedy, romance, and comedy, had the highest level of views of more than a half. By contrast, the horror movie had the lowest level taking part with a small minority. Between five countries action was most likely to undertake some views, especially in India, with a small proportion of lookup, while in Ireland was more likely popular with a mere 3 per cent. The differences of views between New Zeeland and Japan present popularity of all genres were particularly marked in the case of total with a fifth, where around twice higher for Ireland, then for the other countries. It’s clear from the evidence that each genre plays a significant role in the popularity of the global views.
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the score of cinema viewing of films in five
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different
countries, according to the
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genre
of movies.

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, any genres, which include, action, comedy, romance, and comedy, had the highest level of
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views
of more than a half. By contrast, the horror movie had the lowest level taking part with a
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small
minority.

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some
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views
,
especially
in India, with a
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small
proportion of lookup, while in Ireland was more likely popular with a mere 3 per cent.

The differences of
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views
between
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New Zeeland
and Japan present popularity of all genres were
particularly
marked in the case of total with a fifth, where around twice higher for Ireland, then for the other countries.

It’s
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clear
from the evidence that each
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genre
plays a significant role in the popularity of the global
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views
.
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IELTS academic Genres of our society in the text

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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