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The bar chart states the top ten countries for the produce and consumption in 2014.

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The energy bar chart states the top ten countries for production and consumption in 2014. firstly, the pie chart indicates ten different countries like China, the united states, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea. These countries produce energy and how many utilised during 2014. compared with nine countries China for more produce energy and used energy. China produced energy, it was 5398 billion kWh and used 5322 billion kWh, of which 76 billion kWh was saved. That is a big amount of saved energy. then second is the production and consumption number in big variation in India and Canada. in 2014, India was produced energy is 871 billion kWh, and the consumption number is 698. 8 billion kWh. which saved energy was 113. 2 billion kWh. In other countries compared in Germany country consumption amount more than production. That is opposite to another country. Overview, all countries production kWh is a high compare the consumption kWh.
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bar chart states the top ten
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in 2014.

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, the pie chart indicates ten
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like China, the
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, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea. These
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produce
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and how
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utilised
during 2014.

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compared
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China for more produce
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energy
and
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used
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. China produced
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, it was 5398
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billion
kWh and
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used
5322
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billion
kWh, of which 76
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kWh
was saved
.

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a
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amount of saved
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energy
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number in
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variation in India and Canada.
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2014, India
was produced
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is 871
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kWh, and the
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number is 698. 8
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kWh.
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which
saved
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was 113. 2
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kWh.

In other
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compared in Germany
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amount more than
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Overview, all
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kWh is a high compare the
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