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ietnamese students chose to study in 3 diffirent counties

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The given line graph provides information about how many Vietnamese students chose to study in 3 diffirent counties during a 15-year period starting from 2000. Overall, its is obvious that the number of V students studying France and America increased but that of Russia decreased during the period shown. Noticeably, America was well-known for V students in 2015. In 2000, the figure for V students opting to France was 3, 5 mil. At the same year, V students studying in Russia was 3mil. While the number of V students studying in America increased slightly to 2 mil, that in France and Russia was a downward trend to 2, 5 and 2, 2 mil from 2000 to 2005. In the same period between 2005 and 2010, there was a significant diffirence in the trend in the number of students choosing to studying in 3 nations. That in France, Russia, America remained stable at 2, 5 mil, continued to decrease to underwll 2 mil, rose to 3 mil respectively. 2010 and 2015 witnessed a plunge by 2 mil in the data of v students studying in America and France and a recovery of the dta in Russia by over 1 mil. In the last year, the figure for students choosing to study in America was 5 mil, twice as many as the figure in Russia with 2, 5 mil and the figure in France was 4, 5 mil in the same time.
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Vietnamese
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chose to study in 3
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diffirent
counties during a 15-year period starting from 2000.
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, its is obvious that the number of V
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students
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studying
France and America increased
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that of Russia decreased during the period shown.
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, America was well-known for V
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students
in 2015. In 2000, the
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for V
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opting to France was 3, 5
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. At the same year, V
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students
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studying
in Russia was 3mil. While the number of V
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students
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studying
in America increased
slightly
to 2
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mil
, that in France and Russia was a downward trend to 2, 5 and 2, 2
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mil
from 2000 to 2005. In the same period between 2005 and 2010, there was a significant
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diffirence
in the trend in the number of
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choosing to
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studying
in 3 nations. That in France, Russia, America remained stable at 2, 5
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mil
, continued to decrease to
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2
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, rose to 3 mil
respectively
. 2010 and 2015 witnessed a plunge by 2
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mil
in the data of v
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students
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in America and France and a recovery of the
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dta
in Russia by over 1 mil. In the last year, the
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for
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choosing to study in America was 5
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, twice as
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as the
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in Russia with 2, 5
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and the
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in France was 4, 5
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in the same time.

IELTS academic ietnamese students chose to study in 3 diffirent counties

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240 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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