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The table and bar chart illustrate how trip times in a city center altered after enhancements to the transportation network were completed, as well as the expenses of utilizing tram, bus, taxi, and car in the city.

The table and bar chart illustrate how trip times in a city center altered after enhancements to the transportation network were completed, as well as the expenses of utilizing tram, bus, taxi, and car in the city. VypQJ
The table and bar chart illustrate how trip times in a city center altered after enhancements to the transportation network were completed, as well as the expenses of utilizing tram, bus, taxi, and car in the city. Overall, journeys by tram and bus are still slower than by car or taxi, but they are more economical. The cheapest mode of transport is the bus, at €0. 40 per kilometre. Nevertheless, it is also the slowest before and even after being upgraded. Average trip times were 28 minutes before development and 23 minutes after. The tram is more slightly higher, about €0. 50 per kilometre. Commuting by tram has declined 6 minutes from 22 minutes before improvements to 16 minutes. The most expensive way to travel around the city is by taxi, at €1. 80 per kilometre. It remains the fastest mode of transport but it has grown 3 minutes after upgrade between 9 and 12 minutes. Car drivers have been seen the biggest rise in the trip times, from 10 to 15 minutes.
The table and bar chart illustrate how trip times in a city center altered after enhancements to the transportation network
were completed
,
as well
as the expenses of utilizing tram, bus, taxi, and car in the city.

Overall
, journeys by tram and bus are
still
slower than by car or taxi,
but
they are more economical.

The cheapest mode of transport is the bus, at €0. 40 per
kilometre
.
Nevertheless
, it is
also
the slowest
before
and even after
being upgraded
. Average trip times were 28 minutes
before
development and 23 minutes after. The tram is more
slightly
higher, about €0. 50 per
kilometre
. Commuting by tram has declined 6 minutes from 22 minutes
before
improvements to 16 minutes.

The most expensive way to travel around the city is by taxi, at €1. 80 per
kilometre
. It remains the fastest mode of transport
but
it has grown 3 minutes after upgrade between 9 and 12 minutes. Car drivers have been
seen
the biggest rise in the trip times, from 10 to 15 minutes.
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IELTS academic The table and bar chart illustrate how trip times in a city center altered after enhancements to the transportation network were completed, as well as the expenses of utilizing tram, bus, taxi, and car in the city.

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