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describing a process shown

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The given diagram illustrates how a finished product is manufactured from raw materials. Overall, there are several stages in this process, which are including two main factors: the fundamental manufacturing process and collecting together with analyzing feedback. Firstly, after doing product resreach, design team will prepare plan for production planning stage. Meanwhile, raw materials and produced components are stored to prepare for the the same step. At this point, they are discussed carefully to provide feedback for the previous step. At the following phase, this product is assembed and investigated before being testing, and its result brings information for design team to adjust their work. Subsequently, products undergo two consecutive phases including packpaging and despatch before being sold in the market. Information of feedback are collected from sales stage for the market research team, who analyzed the pros and cons of the finished goods and provide information for previous steps, such as advertising, packaging and design.

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product
is manufactured
 from raw materials.

Overall
, there are several stages in this process, which are including two main factors: the fundamental manufacturing process and collecting together with analyzing feedback.

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product
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, design team will prepare plan for production planning stage. Meanwhile, raw materials and produced components are stored
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the the
 same step. At this point, they are discussed
carefully
 to provide feedback for the previous step. At the following phase, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
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assembed
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before
 being testing, and its result brings information for design team to adjust their work.

Subsequently
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products
 undergo two consecutive phases including Possible spelling mistake found.packagingpack paging
packpaging
 and despatch This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
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being sold
 in the market. Information of feedback are collected
 from sales stage for the market research team, who analyzed the pros and cons of the finished This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and provide information for previous steps, such as advertising, packaging and design. 