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ielts writing task 1 flow-chart

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The first flow diagram illustrates the process of glass container production, and the second diagram shows steps in the process of recycling used glass. ! ! We can see that glass is made using three main raw materials, and that the manufacturing process consists of four distinct stages. It requires five steps to turn used glass into new glass products. ! ! At the first stage in the production of glass, sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed together. Next, this mixture is heated in a glass furnace at approximately 1500℃ to produce molten glass. The molten glass can then be shaped, by blowing, to create the end products, namely glass containers. Glass recycling begins with the collection of used glass products. The collected glass is sorted according to its colour, and then washed in order to remove any impurities. At the fourth stage of recycling, the glass is crushed and melted, and the resulting molten glass can finally be moulded to create new items.

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 flow diagram illustrates the process of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 container production, and the second

diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 steps in the process of recycling This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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glass
. ! !

We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
is made
 using three main raw materials, and that the manufacturing process

consists of four distinct stages. It requires five steps to turn This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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glass
 into new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 products. ! !

At the first
 stage in the production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
, sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are
mixed
 together. Next
, this mixture is heated
 in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 furnace at approximately 1500℃ to produce

molten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
. The molten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 can then be shaped
, by blowing, to create the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 products,

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namely
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glass
 containers.

Glass recycling This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 with the collection of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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glass
 products. The collected You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
is sorted


according to its Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
, and then washed in order to remove any impurities. At the fourth stage of

recycling, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
is crushed
 and melted, and the resulting molten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
 can finally
 be Possible spelling mistake found.moldedmounded
moulded
 to

create new items. 