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The given tabular chart provides information about the distance travelled by six different modes of transportation in a European nation between 1995 and 2015. Calibration of data is in billions of kilometres. As per the table, air travel covered 2 billion passengers kilometres in 1995. The figures rose to 8 billion within ten years, reaching dramatically 20 billion in 2015. The number of Kilometres travelled by bicycle was similar to that of air travel in the initial year, and it remained constant after twenty years. Passenger kilometres by motorcycles increased from 5 billion in 1995 to 6 billion in 2015.
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tabular chart provides information about the distance travelled by six
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modes of transportation in a European nation between 1995 and 2015. Calibration of data is in
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billions
of
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kilometres
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As per the table, air travel covered 2
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billion
passengers
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kilometres
in 1995. The figures rose to 8
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billion
within ten years, reaching
dramatically
20
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billion
in 2015. The number of
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Kilometres
travelled by bicycle was similar to that of air travel in the initial year, and it remained constant after twenty years. Passenger
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kilometres
by motorcycles increased from 5
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billion
in 1995 to 6
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in 2015.
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IELTS academic passenger kilometers travelled by different means of transport

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