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The picture illustrates a geothermal power plant and stages of energy production. It is clear that this operation has 5 different consecutive processes. According to the plan, the cold water from outside arrives at the injection well and descends 4 and a half thousand kilometers. Then, keeping this depth, water goes through the geotermal zone where it is heated by hot underground rocks. Further, warm water is lifted and again gets to the surface by another pump station. There, fluid enters the condenser which converts it to the steam. Final stage is the generator connected with the turbine powered by steam. Fumes make the turbine spin and the generator starts to work producing the electricity which supply for power lines.
The picture illustrates a geothermal power plant and stages of energy production. It is
clear
that this operation has 5
different
consecutive processes.

According to the plan, the
cold
water from outside arrives at the injection well and descends 4 and a half thousand kilometers. Then, keeping this depth, water goes through the
geotermal
zone where it
is heated
by hot underground rocks.
Further
, warm water
is lifted
and again
gets
to the surface by another pump station. There, fluid enters the condenser which converts it to the steam. Final stage is the generator connected with the turbine powered by steam. Fumes
make
the turbine spin and the generator
starts
to work producing the electricity which supply for power lines.
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IELTS academic IELTS writing academic diagram description

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
120 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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