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IELTS Task 1: Influencers Bar Chart Dave Dave 2 months ago IELTS Essay Task 1 Instagram Influencers

IELTS Task 1: Influencers Bar Chart Dave Dave 2 months ago IELTS Essay Task 1 Instagram Influencers nxnqR

The bar graph illustrates the followers' statistics for five popular personalities on Instagram during the period of 2018 to 2021. In 2018, 120 million fans of Selena on Instagram that was the greatest part of the total amount. The second-highest popularity of Cristiano among people was just above 100 million, whereas more than 3300 million people followed in 2021, which was more than half of 2018. 110million people were influenced by Ariana in 2018. The fan of Kylie was just under 100 million on Instagram in 2018. Surprisingly, in 2021, the popularity of Ariana Granda and Kylie Jenner showed similarly dramatic rising trends. It was just 250 million respectively. The Rock and Selena accounts were approximately 250million and 240million respectively. Cristiano Ronaldo showed above 300million that was more than double as compared to 2010. Overall, the popularity of Instagram accounts, by comparison, was more than one-fifth in 2021

The bar graph illustrates the followers' statistics for five popular personalities on Instagram during the period of 2018 to 2021.

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 that was more than double as compared to 2010.

Overall
, the popularity of Instagram accounts, by comparison, was more than one-fifth in 2021