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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing-Bar Chart: The diagram below shows changes in mode of transport chosen by travellers in a European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing-Bar Chart: The diagram below shows changes in mode of transport chosen by travellers in a European country from 1950 to 1990. jRVYd
The given bar chart illustrates the information modes of transport and year chosen by percentage of travellers in a European country from 1950 and 1990. Overall, the graph reveals that in modes chose of most other person's car of travellers since 1990, while the bikes and walking were people was travelled by over the two periods and change in modes of transport used by bus. As can be seen from the chart provide that 20% people chosen by bus in 1950, while car 8%, and bikes 32%, and 40% people used to bikes and walking in 1990, but, the contrast period of 17% people preferred to walk. In 1970, the number of people sharply inclined 32% and 28% travelled by bus and cars, while, the used of the people 22% travelled by bikes. The below period 1990 used in travel inclined, but the period change in 23% people chose the other transport system. In 1990, the chart showed the number of people used to travel by car, while the mode chosen approximately 17% by bus, and bikes and walking were opted for, by around 10% of travellers each.
The
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given
bar chart illustrates the information
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modes
of transport and year chosen by percentage of
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travellers
in a European country
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from 1950 and 1990
.

Overall
, the graph reveals that in
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modes
chose of most other person's
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car
of
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travellers
since 1990, while the
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bikes
and walking were
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people
was travelled
by over the two
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periods
and
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change
in
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modes
of transport
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used
by bus.

As can be
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seen
from the chart provide that 20%
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people
chosen by bus in 1950, while
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car
8%, and
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bikes
32%, and 40%
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people
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used
to
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bikes
and walking in 1990,
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but
, the contrast
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period
of 17%
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people
preferred to walk.

In 1970, the number of
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people
sharply
inclined 32% and 28% travelled by bus and
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cars
, while, the
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used
of the
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people
22% travelled by
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bikes
. The below
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period
1990
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used
in travel inclined,
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but
the
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period
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change
in 23%
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people
chose the other transport system.

In 1990, the chart
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showed
the number of
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people
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used
to travel by
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car
, while the
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mode
chosen approximately 17% by bus, and
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bikes
and walking
were opted
for, by around 10% of
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travellers
each.
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IELTS academic IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing-Bar Chart: The diagram below shows changes in mode of transport chosen by travellers in a European country from 1950 to 1990.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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