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I writing my daily routine is give my teacher. Please help me finish my daily routine. Thank you

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MY DAILY ROUTINE: I think I have my daily routine has an is interesting and scientific. I like it very much. In the morning I get up at 5: 45, I always have a habit of listening to music to help myself be more awake. Then I brush my teeth, wash my face, wear uniform. I go to school at 6: 20 am, have breakfast and get to class on time. Because my house is quite close to the school, every morning I go on foot with my friends. After finishing 5 periods of knowledgcable, I go home have lunch and relax. Around 2 pm, I start go to some extra classes such as math, literature, English, chemistry, etc. My afternoon schedule is quite busy, every day I have to attend 2 shifts. The first shift is from 2: 00 to 4: 00 p. m, the second shift is from 4: 00 to 6: 00pm. After finishing my extra classes, I going to the gym and do exercise 40 minutes. Around 7 pm I go home to take a shower, have dinner and wash dishes. At 8 p. m. I began to sit down at my table again to review the old lessons and prepare for the new ones. I usually study for 2 hours a day, so at 10 pm, I just give myself 30 minutes to relax by surfing social networks such as facebook, intagrams, tik tok, youtube, . . . . At about 10: 45 I brush my teeth and go to bed. Although I feel that my schedule is quite busy for studying but I personally find it very good. In addition to such normal days, I also take time for myself to travel on summer holidays with my family to relax and enjoy life to help my mind more comfortable.
MY DAILY ROUTINE: I
think
I have my daily routine has an is interesting and scientific. I like it
very
much. In the morning I
get
up at 5: 45, I always have a habit of listening to music to
help
myself be more awake. Then I brush my teeth, wash my face, wear uniform. I go to school at 6: 20 am, have breakfast and
get
to
class
on time.
Because
my
house
is quite close to the school, every morning I go on foot with my friends. After finishing 5 periods of
knowledgcable
, I go home have lunch and relax. Around 2 pm, I
start
go to
some
extra classes such as math, literature, English, chemistry, etc. My afternoon schedule is quite busy, every day I
have to
attend 2 shifts. The
first
shift is from 2: 00 to 4: 00 p. m, the second shift is from 4: 00 to 6: 00pm. After finishing my extra classes,
I going
to the gym and do exercise 40 minutes. Around 7 pm I go home to take a shower, have dinner and wash dishes. At 8 p. m. I began to sit down at my table again to review the
old
lessons and prepare for the new ones. I
usually
study for 2 hours a day,
so
at 10 pm, I
just
give myself 30 minutes to relax by surfing social networks such as
facebook
,
intagrams
,
tik tok
,
youtube
, .
.
.
.
At about 10: 45 I brush my teeth and go to bed. Although I feel that my schedule is quite busy for studying
but
I
personally
find it
very
good
.
In addition
to such normal days, I
also
take time for myself to travel on summer holidays with my family to relax and enjoy life to
help
my mind more comfortable.

IELTS academic I writing my daily routine is give my teacher. Please help me finish my daily routine. Thank you

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
305 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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