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The graph below show information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The chart shows the results of a report from 2008 about the amounts of various energy sources used in the United States since 1980 and includes predictions until 2030. Overall, since 1980 the consumption of all sources, except hydropower, have increased and the projections show that petrol and oil and coal will continue to grow while the others are to remain relatively stable. From the start, petrol and oil has been the most used source of energy, starting at 35 quadrillion units and currently resting at roughly 42 quadrillion units. Natural gas began with 20 quadrillion units and coal at about 16 but both increased to the same figure of roughly 25 quadrillion units each. Nuclear power, solar and wind power and hydropower each started at approximately 4 quadrillion units but while the first two rose to 7 and 5 quadrillion units respectively, hydropower remained at the same value. Petrol and oil and coal are forecast to continue increasing by roughly 5 and 6 quadrillion units respectively. The other four power sources are forecast to remain stable until 2030 besides an addition one quadrillion units for nuclear power and for solar power in the final years.
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the results of a report from 2008 about the amounts of various energy

sources
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used
in the United States since 1980 and includes predictions until 2030.

Overall
, since 1980 the consumption of all sources, except hydropower, have increased and

the projections
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that petrol and oil and coal will continue to grow while the others are to

remain
relatively
stable.

From the
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start
, petrol and oil has been the most
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used
source of energy, starting at 35

quadrillion
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units
and
currently
resting at roughly 42 quadrillion
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units
. Natural gas began with

20 quadrillion
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units
and coal at about 16
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but
both increased to the same figure of roughly 25

quadrillion
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each. Nuclear
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power
, solar and wind
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power
and hydropower each
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started
at

approximately 4 quadrillion
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units
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but
while the
first
two rose to 7 and 5 quadrillion units

respectively
, hydropower remained at the same value.

Petrol and oil and coal are forecast to continue increasing by roughly 5 and 6 quadrillion

units
respectively
. The other four
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power
sources are forecast to remain stable until 2030

besides
an addition one quadrillion
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units
for nuclear
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power
and for solar
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power
in the final

years.
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IELTS academic The graph below show information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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