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Anthropology graduates and what are they doing after graduation.

The given chart is an illustration of what Anthropology graduates are doing after finishing their undergraduate degree from a university. It also has a table which shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. To summarize the chart briefly, let’s start with the one who are working for full time after their graduation. There are about 53 percent people in this category. These 52 percent people have secured a full time job right after their graduate studies. 15 percent of the entire graduates are working on a part time role according to the pie chart. Whereas 5% and 8% of graduates are working part time plus studying a postgraduate course and doing a full time postgraduate study respectively. 12% of these graduates are still unemployed and 8% has not known for what they are doing. Salaries of anthropology graduates also have a wide variation. Each sector earns from a range of $25000 to $10000+ still there are many variations as to the amount of salary and the number of graduates in that salary bracket. Graduates working as freelance consultants and in government sector who are earning in a range of $25000 to $49999 is only 5% whereas graduates working in private sector in this salary bracket is 10%. Similarly, in the salary bracket of %50000 to $74999 graduates working as freelance, government and private sector are 15%, 15% and 35% respectively. There are two more salary brackets given in the table and it also has a similar kind of variation.
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of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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after their graduation. There are about 53 percent
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studies. 15 percent of the entire
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role according to the pie chart. Whereas 5% and 8% of
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plus studying a postgraduate course and doing a full
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postgraduate study
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Salaries of anthropology
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earns from a range of $25000 to $10000+
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who are earning in a range of $25000 to $49999 is
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in this
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bracket is 10%.
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bracket of %50000 to $74999
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as freelance,
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and private
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are 15%, 15% and 35%
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brackets
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IELTS academic Anthropology graduates and what are they doing after graduation.

Academic
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3 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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