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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

Few citizens claim the approval of an international sports event hosted by their own nation, whereas others think, it won't be appropriate and the disadvantages will overpower which will leave an impact overall. Firstly, the pros of organizing an international sports event are, that the country's name is identified all over the world. It also sets, an example, worldwide that the nation is capable to manage and organise an event which has a global identity. In addition, sportsperson, celebrities, and citizens all over the globe comes under one roof to motivate and support their flag and favourite players. The sight of diverse culture on an international scale is a treat to watch for every individual who is participating and supporting their countries. And international exchange might benefit few of our national brands, shops and other codinal business. This affects and benefits people in team of economy. In many company job vacancies will be available, thus providing employment to large digits. In a country like India there are many touristy places to explore, thus increasing tourism, as well as the economy of the nation. Although, the government has to face a lot of pressure in terms of finance. India is a developing country with an enormous number of population. To host such event crores of governments money will be on stake which, will effect the nation and the citizen. For instance, The USA president visited India a few years back, a tremendous amount of money was spend on his visit starting from security to hospitality. In my opinion, the country should have the ability to manage the drawbacks of the nation with expanding its reputation.
Few citizens claim the approval of an
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international
sports
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event
hosted by their
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own
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nation
, whereas others
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think
, it won't be appropriate and the disadvantages will overpower which will
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leave
an impact
overall
.

Firstly
, the pros of organizing an
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international
sports
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event
are, that the country's name
is identified
all over the world. It
also
sets, an example, worldwide that the
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nation
is capable to manage and
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organise
an
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event
which has a global identity.

In addition
, sportsperson, celebrities, and citizens all over the globe
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comes
under one roof to motivate and support their flag and
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favourite
players. The sight of diverse culture on an
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international
scale is a treat to
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watch
for every individual who is participating and supporting their
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countries
. And
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international
exchange might benefit few of our national brands, shops and other
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codinal
business. This affects and benefits
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people
in team of economy. In
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many
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company
job vacancies will be available,
thus
providing employment to large digits. In a
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country
like India there are
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many
touristy places to explore,
thus
increasing tourism,
as well
as the economy of the nation.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, the
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government
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has to
face
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a lot of
pressure in terms of finance. India is a developing
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country
with an enormous number of population. To host such
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event
crores of
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governments
money will be on stake which, will
Did you mean "affect"?
effect
the
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nation
and the citizen.

For instance
, The USA president visited India a few years back, a tremendous amount of money was
Consider using a past participle here: "spent".
spend
on his visit starting from security to hospitality.

In my opinion, the
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country
should have the ability to manage the drawbacks of the
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nation
with expanding its reputation.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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274 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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