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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day

The maps show the improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. First, in 2010 there are Two buildings of Student accommodation comparing now there is another building. Two are together and one over the road. Second, the Shops, Restaurant and University offices gathering into one area Student facilities. Around campus 2010 Art and Science were on the same building on the contrary in campus now we can distinguish of the separate between them. Lawn and seating area diminish totally the road became to be broader. In conclusion abundance of changes were happened over the years.

The maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the improvements that have been made
 to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

First
, in 2010 there are Two buildings of Student accommodation comparing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 there is another building. Two are together and one over the road.

Second, the Shops, Restaurant and University offices gathering into one area Student facilities.

Around campus 2010 Art and Science were on the same building on the contrary
 in campus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 we can distinguish of the separate between them.

Lawn and seating area diminish totally
 the road became to be broader.

In conclusion
 abundance of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
were happened
 over the years. 