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THE ENVIROMENT AND OUR FUTURE

THE ENVIROMENT AND OUR FUTURE 0MKWG

Nowadays, we can’t begin a day without hearing news about the environment or the serious of pollution. Avoiding the rapid increase in the amount of pollution is so difficult that the government and the environmentalists have made all effort to reduce it for ages. However, we can’t live without water but the sources of water over the world are becoming more and more polluted on account of the amount of wasted water and some more evidences. In the other words, the plants and animals are in danger too, because of the deforestation, some plants are abused so much, especially the woods are cut down in order to make tables and chairs. Beside, some animals are on the verge of extinction. Two year before the number of tigers over the world is twice as much as now, not only are tigers, but some other species are reduced, that’s why there are more and more animals and plants are written in Red Book. But for our help, the government and the environmentalist couldn’t have been able to do. Therefore, if each of us contributes to help decrease the pollution and try to conserve the environment, especially the plants and animals, we will be able to live in a better future.

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so
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live
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but
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before
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help
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