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Hydroelectric Power Station

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This diagram illustrates the process of electricity generation through hydroelectric power station. Power is generated through the flow of water and moving turbine. In the beginning it can be seen that a dam is built at the starting stage of power station where river water is stored in a high-level reservoir and low-level. The intake of water is open in daytime and closed at night. During the day water flows with high pressure through a pipeline towards the generator which causes the rotation of turbines. This movement of turbines generates electricity and this electric power is transmitted towards national grid via power lines. After the sunset, the flow of water inside the power station is closed and flow of water is pumped back to high-level and low-level reservoir using reversible turbines. This hydroelectric power station is a renewable source of electrical energy which is nice thing for the environment as human race is constantly trying to build a sustainable future.
This diagram illustrates the process of electricity generation through hydroelectric
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and moving turbine.

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where river
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water
is stored
in a high-level reservoir and low-level. The intake of
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water
is open in daytime and closed at night.

During the day
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water
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flows
with high pressure through a pipeline towards the generator which causes the rotation of turbines. This movement of turbines generates electricity and this electric
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power
is transmitted
towards national grid via
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lines.

After the sunset, the
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flow
of
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inside the
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power
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station
is closed
and
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flow
of
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water
is pumped
back to high-level and low-level reservoir using reversible turbines.

This hydroelectric
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power
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station
is a renewable source of electrical energy which is nice thing for the environment as human race is
constantly
trying to build a sustainable future.
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IELTS academic Hydroelectric Power Station

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5 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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