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The provider process illustrates the information about the various steps which are taken to can the fruit. Overall, the process of pears is a complex which passes through the various steps before the fruit is canned to be used. According to the diagram, firstly, the pears are picking by the hand of farmers and then it transported by the law is to industries. As well as, it waches and then check the quality of tools. After this whole process it stores in cold places. Secondly, weighing of pears and start peeling it and then slicing it and put it into cans. Furthermore, after Canning it is ready for sealing the cans. Moreover, it is cooking and sterilizing on the fire and it starts for labelling on the boxes. After whole process, it store into big boxes and then ready for dispatch.

The provider You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 illustrates the information about the various steps which are taken
 to can the fruit.

Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of pears is a complex which passes through the various steps This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the fruit is canned
 to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
.

According to the diagram, firstly
, the pears are picking by the hand of farmers and then it transported by the law is to industries. As well
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waches
 and then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the quality of tools. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 this whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 it stores in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 places. Secondly
, weighing of pears and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 peeling it and then slicing it and put it into cans.

Furthermore
, after Canning it is ready for sealing the cans. Moreover
, it is cooking and sterilizing on the fire and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 for labelling on the boxes. After whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, it Did you mean "stores"?stores
store
 into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 boxes and then ready for dispatch. 