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How to build an igloo from snow

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The diagram illustrates the process that is used to build an igloo from snow. Overall, there are five main stages in this process, starting with finding an area covered by hard-packed snow and ending with covering the hole with snow blocks. In the first stage of the process, after a surface of hard-packed snow is found, a snow saw is used to cut large blocks to the appropriate size to build the base. After that, the edges of the blocks were smoothed with a saw and placed in a circle, built upward, and a hole was dug under the wall for an entrance. Next, a slightly large block is precisely shaped and placed on the top of the igloo. In the next stage of the process, snow is shoveled onto the outside of the igloo and is packed into all crevices, while the inside of the igloo is smoothed by hand. Any excess snow is also shoved out. Finally, a hole is dug in the shape of the entrance, then covered with snow blocks to complete the igloo.
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to build an igloo from snow.

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, there are five main stages in this
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, starting with finding an area covered by
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snow
and ending with covering the hole with
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blocks
to the appropriate size to build the base. After that, the edges of the
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blocks
were smoothed
with a
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saw
and placed in a circle, built upward, and a hole
was dug
under the wall for an entrance.
Next
, a
slightly
large
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block
is
precisely
shaped and placed on the top of the igloo.

In the
next
stage of the
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process
,
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snow
is shoveled
onto the outside of the igloo and
is packed
into all crevices, while the inside of the igloo
is smoothed
by hand. Any excess
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snow
is
also
shoved out.

Finally
, a hole
is dug
in the shape of the entrance, then covered with
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snow
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blocks
to complete the igloo.
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