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The table depicts information and comparison about carbon dioxide emissions produced by residents in 5 different countries between 2017 and 2018. Overall, it is readily apparent that United States citizens produce the largest amount of carbon dioxide per person; however, China had the biggest CO2 emissions in total. In 2017, people who live in the United States produced approximately 6. 6 tonnes per person, in accumulation, the total emissions of C02 in the United States were 5130 million tonnes, in the next year, it only increased minimally by 2%. Surprisingly, China generates 5130 million tonnes of carbon dioxide, the number is weird considering that their residents produced the lowest number of emissions by 6. 6 tonnes per person. In 2018, the C02 emissions rose significantly by 11% and produced about 5700 million tonnes of emissions, by this, China superseded the United States as the country that produced the biggest amount of C02 emissions. Russians and Japanese produced the same amount of carbon dioxide by 10 tonnes, and both countries did not have any changes through the period; nevertheless, the emissions accumulation was different, Russia produced higher emissions in both periods, in 2018, Rusia produced 1699 million tonnes; meanwhile Japan only produced 1187 million tonnes of C02. On the other hand, people who live in India generate 15 tonnes of emissions; nonetheless, the total emissions of the country were only 1259 million tonnes in 2017, as expected, the number was climbed dramatically by 8%, so in 2018, India generate 1359 million tonnes of CO2 emissions.
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