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The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in 3 years and compares with the European average.

The chart illustrates statistics of the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 different European countries in 2005, 2009, 2015 and compares with European average. Overall, while country 5 maintained its dominance in the number of cars over the given period, country 1 held at least proportion of it. Turning to the details, it is obvious that, being prevalent in 2005 making up a far more than 800, country 5 experienced a slight decrease to just over 800, then followed by a remarkable growth to just under 1000. Similarly, country 1 witnessed fluctuation trend too, thus, being a far over 200vin 2005, the number of cars in this country reached its peak comprising for 400, then declined to the previous point in 2015. Meanwhile, Being a far over 400, country 2, touched the highest point in 2009 constituting for just under 600, then followed by a slight decrease. The average number of cars in these 5 European countries was over 600 in 2005, after following by a slight decline in 2009 increased to just under 800. On the other hand, country 3 experienced a remarkable decline during the given period. Being a far over 600 in 2005, the number of cars in country 3 declined to 600 in 2009 and just under 600 in 2015. Meanwhile, country 4 maintained same trend over the given period comprising for a far over 600.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in 3 years and compares with the European average.

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