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the diagram below shows the production of ethanol oil from grain

The diagram illustrates how ethanol can be obtained from the grain. Overall, there are several distinct stages, from the initial collection of grain to the eventual fuel storage and dry distillers grain. As can be seen, the procedure commences from the grain. The first step of the production is milling the grain and grinding it into powder. Following that, the fine grain will be mixed with water in the cooking stage. Once it has been cooked, the liquefaction process happens in the tank. The next stage is that this mixture of grain powder undergoes a fermentation process. Subsequently, in the distillation stage the fluid is separated into 2 kinds of product, one is ethanol fuel which is the main product and another is solids which is wet distillers grain. The fuel will be channeled to the storage. Once the ethanol fuel is ready, it is stored before being delivered to where it is consumed. On the other hand, the solids will be heat in the dryer to become distillers grain which is for animal feed.
The diagram illustrates how ethanol can
be obtained
from the grain.

Overall
, there are several distinct
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stages
, from the initial collection of
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grain
to the eventual
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fuel
storage and dry distillers grain.

As can be
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seen
, the procedure commences from the
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grain
. The
first
step of the production is milling the
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grain
and grinding it into powder. Following that, the fine
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grain
will
be mixed
with water in the cooking
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stage
. Once it has
been cooked
, the liquefaction process happens in the tank. The
next
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stage
is that this mixture of
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grain
powder undergoes a fermentation process.

Subsequently
, in the distillation
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stage
the fluid
is separated
into 2 kinds of product, one is ethanol
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fuel
which is the main product and another is solids which is wet distillers
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grain
. The
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fuel
will
be channeled
to the storage. Once the ethanol
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fuel
is ready, it
is stored
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before
being delivered
to where it
is consumed
.
On the other hand
, the solids will be heat in the dryer to become distillers
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grain
which is for animal feed.
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