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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The given pie chart depicts the destination of Anthropology graduates after their graduation from particular university and the table illustrates the amount of money they earn after five year's work. An overview, pie chart clearly shows that most of the graduate students engaged in a full -time work and postgraduate study both. In pie chart little above half students engaged in full - time work(52%), 5% of students did part time and post gradate studies in the same time but this is the least percentage part -time work and unemployment students were nearly similar in percentages 15% and 12% respectively 8% students were full - time postgraduate students, Whereas 8% students were not know. In the table, $100, 000+salary range allocated to 40% and 50% students who were engaged in freelance 35% of earned $50, 000 - 74, 999 salary range in private companies after five year's work $25, 000 - 49, 999 salary range was the lowest. As average number of students received $ 75, 000- 99, 999 salary after 5 year's of work.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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