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How electricity generated

How electricity generated 9w6mW

The diagram illustrates the linear process of electricity generating in a hydroelectric power station. Overall, there are several stages invole in the process starting from the float of river’s water to the electricity generating. First of all, water from natural resources, like river, is stored in a dam which considered a high-level reservoir. On day time, dam’s gate is open and allows water to flow directly to the power station and end up at low-level reservoir. However, at night, the water is pumped by turbines in order to send it back to the high-level reservoir. Once the water passes through reversible turbines in daytime, the generator starts its operation. Finally, the generated electricity is subsequently pass through the powerlines which connected to the national grid.

The diagram illustrates the linear process of electricity generating in a hydroelectric power station.

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water
 from natural resources, like river, is stored
 in a dam which considered a high-level reservoir. On day time, dam’s gate is open and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
allows
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water
 to flow directly
 to the power station and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up at low-level reservoir. However
, at night, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 by turbines in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 it back to the high-level reservoir. Once the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 passes through reversible turbines in daytime, the generator This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 its operation. Finally
, the generated electricity is subsequently
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powerlines
 which connected to the national grid. 