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Housing preferences in the uk 2005

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The bar graph illustrates the information about the result of a British survey on the types of housing preferences in the uk 2005. The data has been calibrate in percentage. It can be clearly seen that in 2005, people were liked flats that is 60% of London. After that, 15% people were preferred terraced houses in London. Then, in London, detached houses were nearly 9% liked by people in London. In semi detached houses were liked by people just 18%.
The bar graph illustrates the information about the result of a British survey on the types of housing preferences in the
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2005. The data has been
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in percentage.

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clearly
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that in 2005,
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people
were liked
flats
that is
60% of London. After that, 15%
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people
were preferred
terraced
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houses
in London. Then, in London, detached
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houses
were
nearly
9% liked by
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people
in London. In
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semi detached
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houses
were liked
by
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people
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just
18%.

IELTS academic Housing preferences in the uk 2005

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
80 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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