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average weekly earnings by sex

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The table shows the average weekly earnings of male and female by highest qualification attained and of all working age in 2005. Overall, the women and men succeed in achieving salary that rises with age group and qualification. It is obvious, there was a different in income of man and woman in 2015. The former obtained $506 while the latter was only $397. It is interesting to see that wages of worker with degree or equivalent was twice as much as worker who without qualifications. For example, men with highest qualification recevied $726 compared to $342 for those no qualifications We can see that almost the 55-29/64 age group have a decrease income, however, in GCSE grades A to C or equivalent of male tended to high nearly $70 and in GCE A level or equivalent of female saw an increase around $26. Moreover, the average weekly earnings of men aged 45-54 reached a peak of $575. Finally, the majority of women aged 25-34 were well paid $433 per week.
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the average weekly earnings of male and female by highest qualification attained and of all working age in 2005.
Overall
, the women and
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men
succeed in achieving salary that rises with age group and qualification.

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in income of
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and woman in 2015. The former obtained $506 while the latter was
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$397. It is interesting to
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that wages of worker with degree or equivalent was twice as much as worker who without qualifications.
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$726 compared to $342 for those no
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that almost the 55-29/64 age group have a decrease income,
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, in GCSE grades A to C or equivalent of male tended to high
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an increase around $26.
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aged 45-54 reached a peak of $575.
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, the majority of women aged 25-34 were well paid $433 per week.
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