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the bar charts below illustrate the average house prices in england and some other areas of england including its capital city london. overall, in 95 and 2013, the average cost for houses in london was generally higher than that in england. also, in 2013, the housing expenses in midlands and north east were the lowest among distinct regions. according to the data, in 1995, people in england wanting to own a house must normally pay nearly 15k£, meanwhile, to possess a house in london, dwellers need to pay a little higher, about 20k£. during the 18-year period, london witnessed a dramatically rise in accomodation prices with averagely 40k£ per house, which doubled the housing cost in england. it can be seen that in 2013, the accomodation expense in london was the highest out of 6 different regions, followed by south east and south west with over 30k£ and over 25k£ respectively. north west was the only region that shared the same average house prices with england, which was 20k£, whereas the cost to buy a house was noticeably lower in midlands and north east, the house expense of midlands was over 10k£ meanwhile the figure for north east was 10k£.
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overall
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england
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were the lowest among distinct regions.

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according
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england
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, dwellers need to pay a
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higher, about 20k£.
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with over 30k£ and over 25k£
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was 10k£.
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