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The bar graph demonstrates the amount of higher educated people in Britain split by gender, across three decades and separated by full-time and part-time education. When comparing the number of men and women who studied part-time it is clear that between 1970 and 1981 men were investing in their education more than women, with the exception to this trend being in 1990/1991 when women surpassed them. Looking at the bars that refer to full-time education, we observe the same behaviour as above however, in 1980/81the situation inverted, with a higher number of female pupils studying full-time. Focusing on each gender now, starting with men, the chart shows more of them studying part-time rather than full-time, during the three-decades although it's also visible a growth in the figures of full-time studies. Regarding women, there's an improvement in furthering their education both in full-time and part-time. In conclusion, part-time education is the primary option for both male and female students, with women presenting a bigger increase in numbers. In addition to this, in Britain, both genders have furthered their full-time studies.
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in Britain split by gender, across three decades and separated by full-time and part-time education.

When comparing the number of
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men
and
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women
who studied part-time it is
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clear
that between 1970 and 1981
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men
were investing in their
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education
more than
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women
, with the exception to this trend being in 1990/1991 when
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women
surpassed them. Looking at the bars that refer to full-time
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education
, we observe the same
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as above
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, in 1980/81the situation inverted, with a higher number of female pupils studying full-time.

Focusing on each gender
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, starting with
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, the chart
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more of them studying part-time
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than full-time, during the three-decades although it's
also
visible a growth in the figures of full-time studies. Regarding
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women
, there's an improvement in furthering their
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education
both in full-time and part-time.

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, part-time
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education
is the primary option for both male and female students, with
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women
presenting a bigger increase in numbers.
In addition
to this, in Britain, both genders have furthered their full-time studies.
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IELTS academic higher educated people in Britain split by gender

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