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The bar chart gives data the percentage of English and Wales people lived in their private houses from 1919 to 2011. Overall, the percentage of people owned their own houses increased, the figure of people who lived in rented accommodation decreased in 94 years period. To begin with the lowest percentage households in owned accommodation were about 20%. The highest figure households in rented accommodation were about 80%. Both extremes were the same year which in 1918. Percentage of two categories were different, but one category was increased and another one was decreased later 53 years. After that incident, proportion of two categories reached an equalityin 1971. These figures were at 50%. The figure of people's own houses rose. This proportion was the highest level for category of own houses in 2001. In this year, rented accommodation percentage's was the lowest level at about 30%. Figure of own houses and rented accommodation changed in a respective manner, with about 60% and about 35% in 2011.
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from 1919 to 2011.
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households in
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were about 20%. The highest
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households in rented
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were about 80%. Both extremes were the same
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were at 50%. The
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rose. This proportion was the highest level for
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, with about 60% and about 35% in 2011.
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