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The table illustrates the percentage of poor families from each household in 6 different categories who lived in Australia in 1999.

The table illustrates the percentage of poor families from each household in 6 different categories who lived in Australia in 1999. d3AD7
The table illustrates the percentage of poor families from each household in 6 different categories who lived in Australia in 1999. Overall, it is clear that three types of family single no children, couple with children and sole parent has the highest proportion of people lived in the poverty. Meanwhile, the rest showing the lowest proportion. The highest proportion of poverty families showed almost with one a fifth of (21%) sole parent, while the single, no children families less two percent (19%) than sole parent. The third, with the highest percentage of family living in the poverty was couple with children, it had a half of percentage of sole parent (12%). last three types of family with the lowest percentage of families lived in poverty were couple, no children families with the 7% of people. Single aged person type of family had almost the same proportion with 6%. And aged couple within 4% became the lowest proportion in 1999.
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. The third, with the highest
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in 1999.
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