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Here is report of average final expenditures on mobile phone and landline phone services between 2001 and 2010.

Here is report of average final expenditures on mobile phone and landline phone services between 2001 and 2010. 7YyY

Here is report of average final expenditures on mobile phone and landline phone services between 2001 and 2010. The data shows that the consumption on cell phone increases since this nine years duration and that of residential phone decreases among these years. If we go to past year 2001, $200 was spent on mobile phone where as on residential phone, it was $700. However, as we move on the year of 2010, US consumers spent more on cellular phone ($750) instead of spending on home phone($400). Now a days it is indeed to have one mobile phone with each individuals but the necessity of landline phone is lower. Here is report of average final expenditures on mobile phone and landline phone services between 2001 and 2010. The data shows that the consumption on cell phone increases since this nine years duration For instance, if we go back in 2001, not all the members of our family had mobile with them despite of that we had one landline phone in our home. Nevertheless, now we each members of our family have mobile phone and we disconnect that wire phone in our home. Accordingly, with our need people are more likely to mobile phones rather than landlines phone because of ease of take along with them.

Here is report of average final expenditures on mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
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 and landline You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 services between 2001 and 2010. The data This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
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 that the consumption on cell You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 increases since this nine years duration and that of residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 decreases among these years.

If we go to past You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2001, $200 was spent
 on mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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where as
 on residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
, it was $700. However
, as we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
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year
 of 2010, US consumers spent more on cellular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 ($750) instead
 of spending on home You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone($400)
. Did you mean "nowadays"?Nowadays
Now a days
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phone
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individuals
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but
 the necessity of landline You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 is lower. Here is report of average final expenditures on mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 and landline You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 services between 2001 and 2010. The data This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that the consumption on cell You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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For instance
, if we go back in 2001, not all the members of our family had mobile with them Did you mean "despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?despite
despite of
 that we had one landline You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 in our home. Nevertheless
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 we each The noun should be probably in the singular form: "member"?member
members
 of our family have mobile Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).phone, and
phone and
 we disconnect that wire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 in our home.

Accordingly
, with our need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are more likely to mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
rather
 than landlines You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
 of take along with them. 