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Here is a similar graph. The topic is slightly different, and so is the data. Write some sentences describing the different patterns on the graph, making sure you vary your sentence structures between the three examples we´ve looked at. EkXR
The graph shows the changes and the overall decline in the share price of KPB over a five-year period from 2006 to 2010. At the beginning of the period the share price was at USD 13 per share. There were several fluctuations until late 2006 when there was a sudden increase from USD 21 to USD 31 per share. This higher price did not last long, however, and it fell before rising strongly again in 2008. From mid-2008 there was a sharp downward trend until the end of the year when it fell to the lowest point in this period at just over USD 7 per share. After that the share price recovered and, despite some fluctuations, continued to rise until it reached a peak of USD 17 in early 2010. Until late 2010 the trend was downward again, ending the year at just over USD 12. KPB made significant gains and losses during this period but overall lost around USD 1 per share.
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price of
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over a five-year
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from 2006 to 2010.

At the beginning of the
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the
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price was at USD 13 per

share. There were several fluctuations until late 2006 when there was a

sudden increase from USD 21 to USD 31 per
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. This higher price did

not last long,
however
, and it fell
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rising
strongly
again in 2008. From

mid-2008 there was a sharp downward trend until the
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of the year when

it fell to the lowest point in this
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at
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over USD 7 per
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share
. After

that the
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share
price recovered and, despite
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fluctuations, continued to

rise until it reached a peak of USD 17 in early 2010. Until late 2010 the

trend was downward again, ending the year at
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over USD 12.

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made significant gains and losses during this
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overall


lost around USD 1 per
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IELTS academic Here is a similar graph. The topic is slightly different, and so is the data. Write some sentences describing the different patterns on the graph, making sure you vary your sentence structures between the three examples we´ve looked at.

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164 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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