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Describe the map that illustrates the road access in 2007 and 2010.

Describe the map that illustrates the road access in 2007 and 2010. 2R88w
The two maps represent automobile road to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Overall, the parking and bus stations are totally changed their locations. To begin with, there is a hospital in the north side and hospital road in the middle of the map. There was one parking for staff and visitors on the right corner of hospital in 2007 and this parking was common for everyone. Afterwards, the car parking was divided in two parts and there are different locations for parking automobiles for workers and community. There was also a number of small bus stations in front of the hospital building in 2007 though three years later it has destroyed and one huge and main bust stop was built. However, two roundabouts have developed opposite of the building in 2010 but Ring and city did not change their places over years.
The two maps represent automobile road to a city
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hospital
between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the
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parking
and bus stations are
totally
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changed
their locations. To
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begin
with, there is a
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hospital
in the north side and
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hospital
road in the middle of the map. There was one
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parking
for staff and visitors on the right corner of
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hospital
in 2007 and this
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parking
was common for everyone. Afterwards, the car
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parking
was divided
in two parts and there are
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different
locations for
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parking
automobiles for workers and community. There was
also
a number of
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small
bus stations in front of the
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hospital
building in 2007 though three years later it has
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destroyed
and one huge and main bust
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stop
was built
.
However
, two roundabouts have developed opposite of the building in 2010
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but
Ring and city did not
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change
their places over years.
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IELTS academic Describe the map that illustrates the road access in 2007 and 2010.

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