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Task 1: The charts show the info about the use of the Internet in five countries in Europe in 2000.

Task 1: The charts show the info about the use of the Internet in five countries in Europe in 2000. 7JLKY
The charts outline the percentage of the population using the internet and the average spending on shopping on the internet per person in five countries ( Germany, Sweden, France, Spain and The UK) in 2000. Especially, the highest ratio of Internet users was in Sweden and the Spanish spent the most money for shopping online. Looking at the first chart in more detail, the proportion of users in Spain was 5% while in France, the figure for users doubled the ratio of users of Spain. Next, 35% was seen in the percentage of Sweden. Followed by Germany and the United Kingdom, there were 15% and 20% orderly. Turning to the second chart, in Germany, people used 46 euros for shopping on the internet while the average spending of Sweden was higher than that of Germany with 76 euros. Next, France, Spain and The UK had 57, 10 and 87 euros respectively.
The charts outline the percentage of the population using the internet and the average spending on shopping on the internet per person in five countries
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Germany, Sweden, France, Spain and The UK) in 2000.
Especially
, the highest ratio of Internet
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users
was in Sweden and the Spanish spent the most money for shopping online.

Looking at the
first
chart in more detail, the proportion of
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users
in Spain was 5% while in France, the figure for
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users
doubled the ratio of
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users
of Spain.
Next
, 35% was
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seen
in the percentage of Sweden. Followed by Germany and the United Kingdom, there were 15% and 20% orderly.

Turning to the second chart, in Germany,
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people
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used
46 euros for shopping on the internet while the average spending of Sweden was higher than that of Germany with 76 euros.
Next
, France, Spain and The UK had 57, 10 and 87 euros
respectively
.
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IELTS academic Task 1: The charts show the info about the use of the Internet in five countries in Europe in 2000.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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