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he first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

he first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below yr2V

The table illustrates the number of UK residents who traveled abroad between the years 1994 to 1998 for different purposes. It can be seen that the holidays were the main reason for traveling abroad. According to the first chart during 1994 most UK residents travel around the globe to enjoy their holidays, the number of travelers was around 15000 in 1994, which slightly decreased to 14898 in one year. The number of travelers steadily improve over the years, which was almost 21000 people traveled for holiday purposes in 1998. The second main reason for traveling was business purposes. Where numbers were increasing quite steadily. The number of travelers who visit their friends and relatives increased over time. The bar chart shows that most of the travelers visited Westen Europe compare to North America or any other places. It can be seen that more than 15000 people visited Europe from 1994 to 1995, these numbers increased sharply from 1996 to 1998, from around over 20000 in 1996 to almost 25000 in 1998. While numbers were quite low for North America and Other countries visitors, with less than 5000. To sum, the table and graph shows that travelers number was highest in 1998 and most of them visited Western Europe

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 that the holidays were the main reason for traveling abroad.

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travelers
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 were increasing quite steadily
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people
 visited Europe from 1994 to 1995, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
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 from 1996 to 1998, from around over 20000 in 1996 to almost 25000 in 1998. While You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 were quite low for North America and Other countries visitors, with less than 5000.

To sum, the table and graph This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
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travelers
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number
 was highest in 1998 and most of them visited Western Europe