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The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. jGxN
The bar graph illustrates, average number of car travelled into city centre by residents and non- residents from the year 1996 to 2005. Overall, it is evident from the graph that during first four years number of car journeys made by residents are more than that of non- resident. While it dropped and keep fluctuating till 2005. Additionally, number of car journeys by resident remained high from 1999 to 2002 and then fallen. Firstly, in 1996, nearly 10000 resident per day travelled by car into city centre, it keep showing variation between 9000 and 10000 till 1999. However, it fallen to 5000 after marking meters was introduced into city centre. Till 2002 the number keep fluctuating around 5000. When traffic to westgate anf park lane street was closed thus number further fallen to 4000 in 2003. In 2005 it was same whereas in 2004 it was 500 less than that in 2003. On the other hand, the number of non- resident cars in 1996 is 5000, it keep increasing and reached slightly above 8000 in 1999. Introduction of parking metre does not affected the number and it remained around 8000 till 2002. Nevertheless, closing of westgate street and park lane reduced the number of car to 3000 in 2003 which shown slight increase in the following year by 100 cars and finally in 2005 the number goes back to 5000 as it was in 1996.
The bar graph illustrates, average
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of
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car
travelled into city
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centre
by
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residents
and non-
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residents
from the year 1996 to 2005.

Overall
, it is evident from the graph that during
first
four years
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number
of
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car
journeys made by
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residents
are more than that of non-
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resident
. While it dropped and
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keep
fluctuating till 2005.
Additionally
,
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number
of
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car
journeys by
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resident
remained high from 1999 to 2002 and then fallen.

Firstly
, in 1996,
nearly
10000
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resident
per day travelled by
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car
into city
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centre
, it
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keep
showing variation between 9000 and 10000 till 1999.
However
, it
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fallen
to 5000 after marking meters
was introduced
into city
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centre
. Till 2002 the
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number
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keep
fluctuating around 5000.
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When
traffic to
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westgate
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anf
park lane street
was closed
thus
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further
fallen to 4000 in 2003. In
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2005 it
was same whereas in 2004 it was 500 less than that in 2003.

On the other hand
, the
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number
of non-
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resident
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cars
in 1996 is 5000, it
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keep
increasing and reached
slightly
above 8000 in 1999. Introduction of parking
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metre
does not
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affected
the
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number
and it remained around 8000 till 2002.
Nevertheless
, closing of
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westgate
street and park lane
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reduced
the
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number
of
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car
to 3000 in 2003 which shown slight increase in the following year by 100
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cars
and
finally
in 2005 the
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goes back to 5000 as it was in 1996.
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IELTS academic The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

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