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The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation.

The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. mPOd
The flow chart describes the effects of forest erosion by cutting trees. Overall, we clearly see that deforestration occurs mainly due to cutting trees. wiping of forests includes 4 steps. cutting the forests leads to flooding, low biodiversity, more drought level. Firstly, entering heavy lodged euipment will compresses the soil, becomes hard and 'baked' before the rain water turn off leads to flooding. next, the fewer roots hold in the top soil erodes the pioneer species. Deliberate or accidental burning have an increased risk of wasting wood and is destroyed. micro-organisms feeds on waste lost and are degraded after long period which has least biodiversity. plants take carbon dioxide and releases oxygen. Due to burning effect, most of the forest is cleared which results less moisture in air and less precipitation. Therefore, drought level rises, species in vegetation are died causes less biodiversity.
The flow chart
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describes
the effects of
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forest
erosion by cutting trees.

Overall
, we
clearly
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see
that
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deforestration
occurs
mainly
due to cutting trees.
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wiping
of
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forests
includes 4 steps.
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cutting
the
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forests
leads to flooding, low biodiversity, more drought level.

Firstly
, entering heavy lodged
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euipment
will
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compresses
the soil, becomes
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hard
and 'baked'
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before
the rain water turn off leads to flooding.
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next
, the fewer roots hold in the top soil erodes the pioneer species.

Deliberate or accidental burning have an increased
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risk
of wasting wood and is
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destroyed
.
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micro-organisms
feeds on waste lost and
are degraded
after long period which has
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least
biodiversity.
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plants
take carbon dioxide and releases oxygen. Due to burning effect, most of the
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forest
is cleared
which results less moisture in air and less precipitation.
Therefore
, drought level rises, species in vegetation are
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died
causes less biodiversity.
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IELTS academic The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation.

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4 paragraphs
143 words
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